the artist calls it “red truck in bookstore” like still-life like “white flowers in vase by window” or “pond with clouds over mountain” like that but different inspired by true events when a small red truck had angry sex with a neighborhood bookstore soon after, people gathered to gawk just Looky-loos but some of them were painters and some of them got excited for this rare opportunity to paint “red truck in bookstore” and set up their easels and look here, the artist was clever under the right front wheel a children’s book with a cartoon red truck on the cover sadly, some don’t have what it takes some can’t look directly at “red truck in bookstore” they look away, instead they paint “old honda with flat tire” or “broken bottle in gutter” or “stray dog pissing on dumpster” stuff like that as for method and technique, it was a fortunate disaster imagine the exact moment the art happened drunk teenagers texting in red truck spinning out over median crashing into bookstore imagine painting that happy moment! imagine the glory, imagine all the art critics wetting their pant! imagine the headlines: last night, two red trucks crashed headfirst into each other inside the capital hill bookstore on colfax and grant one real as red steel, the other a fairytale witnesses claim “art imitates life” no fatalities reported, rescue crews and art school students working around the clock personally, i like “red truck in bookstore” its brave, its original, its both urban and quaint all squished together its colorful, if you like endless layers of red truck yes indeed, i like “red truck in bookstore” just not on my block
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i really liked the imagery in this poem. matter-of-fact but also cheeky at the same time. Always a pleasure to read your works.
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Never expected the dose of reality at the end! What a poem!
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I like the double meaning in “block.” And “pants” is missing an “s” … unless it isn’t. Perhaps it was intentional, which also works.I haven’t heard this story; I am taking a break from almost all news.Happy holidays; I hope you are healing well.
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As art, it would be interesting, momentarily, but it would not go on my wall. The broken bottle in a ditch would bring more imagination. But…. instead, your poetry would be much better appreciate, and is! Happy Christmas holidays!
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thank you, lee, glad you enjoyed
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thank you helen, and marry christmas
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hey pepper! thanks for the heads-up on the typo. and yes i'm healing well. can't walk on it yet, but i'm so ready to go home, still staying with relatives and, well, suburbia just isn't for me. happy holidays to you too! is your blog up? i'd love to go vivit
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thanks jc, and no, i wouldn't recommend putting red trucks on your walls, kind of messy. also, your request for edna st. vincent millay did not fall on deaf ears, i'll start working on it after the new year =)
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One of my kids received a Christmas gift wrapped in red-truck wrapping paper today! So cute. I love kismetic moments like those. 🙂
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Love the way you've managed to fuse art and life here, making them two wings on a confused but determined bird. I laughed out loud at “rescue crews and postmodern art students working around the clock..” and the stanza before it, too, with the failed attempts. Good to see you writing again, Phillip, and hope you are soon free from the chains of suburbia. Merriest Christmas you can have, my friend.
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“confused but determined bird”, thats funny, and pretty much spot on, thank you joy, enjoy your holiday
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that is cute, was there a toy red truck inside?
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Spider-Man pajamas and an electric toothbrush
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